Author's Note

I have currently finished the first draft of my essay. After completing it I reviewed it and one thing I liked about the assignment and the essay itself was the freedom it allowed in writing it. I could tell how I felt about a particular event and how it was shown or effected others. I would like to know what topics I should elaborate more on or add to the paper and if there are any errors either in the form of the paper or grammatical ones that can be fixed.